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大作文：高中畢業(yè)生在受大學教育之前以旅游或工作的方式步入社會的利與弊
In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of young people who decide to do this。
點評：此文和劍5 Test 2上提供的范文一模一樣，屬教育類。教育類的考題出鏡率一直居高不下。因此，烤鴨們在備考時絕對不容小覷，本文可采用對稱式的寫法來展開，下面就本題提供參考思路。
第一段：交代背景和寫作目的，3句話。
第1句：近年來關于高中生畢業(yè)之后是選擇工作或旅行一年還是直接進入大學這一問題引起了人們很大的爭論(spark heated controversy)。
第2句：關于這一舉措有人贊成有人反對。
第3句：本文的目的在于探討該舉的利與弊(explore its pros and cons)。
第二段：探討休學一年旅游或工作的好處，9句話。
第1句：There are numerous advantages of stepping into the society for one year before advanced study.
第2-5句：To begin with, 畢業(yè)生選擇旅行能夠開闊他們的視野，了解世界各地不同的自然景觀和人文景觀，提高他們對生態(tài)環(huán)境的保護意識以及文化包容度，這對于他們返校之后對于專業(yè)的理解和認識會更深。同時，學習的使命感也更大。(2句：Touring for one year enables newly graduates to gain a broader perspective towards the world. 3句：Stricken by the magnificent natural and human landscape, these young adults will attain higher levels of environmental awareness and world peace consciousness. 4句：As the further they explore the natural world and diverse cultures, the deeper understanding these youth will earn towards our mother nature and exotic ethnicities. 5句：By the time they return to the classroom, the sense of mission becomes so strong that their appreciation and comprehension of the major will far-outweigh their peers.)
第6-9句：As a further illustration,畢業(yè)生選擇工作為他們積累了寶貴的工作經(jīng)驗，同時也為他們贏得暫時上的經(jīng)濟獨立，更重要的是工作能夠幫助他們更好地規(guī)劃自己未來的職業(yè)生涯。相對于同齡人而言，他們因為能夠體會工作的艱辛從而珍惜求學機會的來之不易；因為親身經(jīng)歷職場從而能更清醒地認識到市場的需求；因為經(jīng)歷了工作時的酸甜苦辣從而知道自己的優(yōu)勢和劣勢領域。回到學校之后，他們能夠更加有針對性的學習自己在職場上所缺失的技巧和知識。(6句：Entering the job market means the outset of their working-experience accumulation, temporary economic independence and sounder career planning. 7句：To be more exact, these young people will go through all kinds of tribulations and hardships that they will never encounter on campus. 8句：This, in return, informs them of the skills and techniques required by the working sphere as well as their own specific strengths and weaknesses. 9句：In this circumstance, rejoining the campus does not only mean earn a university degree, but further enhancing their employability and marketability.)
第三段：探討該舉措的壞處，4句話。
第1句：Accordingly, there also exists some drawbacks which we may not neglect.
第2-3句：To start with, 畢業(yè)生們由于缺乏涉世經(jīng)驗而容易受浮華世界的誘惑繼而無心求學。(2句：High school graduates may be tempted by material richness of the mundane world that they will be distracted from their normal study. 3句：Furthermore, they may become so pragmatic and practical that myriads of campus enjoyments and freshness will be deprived from them。)
第4句：畢業(yè)生由于在學校壓抑過久以及心智不成熟，馬上步入社會有可能會上當受騙或者由于自律能力不強而誤入歧途。(In addition, teenagers may be depressed for so long a time that hasty entry into the society will result in their unbridled behaviour and some of the extremists may go so far as to commit crimes and betray the law.)
第四段：總結(jié)全文，2句話。
第1句：綜合以上觀點，指出高中畢業(yè)生花一年時間旅游或積累經(jīng)驗既有好處又有壞處。(To conclude, walking into the society either in the forms of traveling or working bears boons and banes.)
第2句：正確的做法是在好處與壞處之間取得一個平衡。(What we need to do is to strike a delicate balance between its advantages and disadvantages.)
（來源：新東方）
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